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June 14, 2011

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This post won in Blogeshwar 9.0 organized by Anubhooti. I thank all the sweet hearts for pushing me to win with their GOLDEN VOTES... Thank you thank you thank you...

This post is published as a part of Blogeshwar and Anubhooti
So much has been written about her over the years. People have exhausted the vocabulary in describing her rejuvenating beauty. But, she still throws up newness and mystery in all her forms that captivate our imagination. Nature’ bores no one indeed. I sought her refuge that evening for some reason that I don’t exactly remember. All I did was just stand on the green grass under the shady breeze of a tree as simple as that. But my eyes were feasted with a whole lot of things that remain everlastingly fresh in my memory. It’s true that she treats with more than you seek. The treat was not just visual. The fragrance of the flower that danced to the tunes of the breeze, the sounds of chirping birds, screaming kids, the soft touch of the grass and the amidst all these, the silence that my heart felt all these made me realize that there is something more, much more to life than my computer and my mobile phone. I was experiencing that new sense of happiness with a blend of mystery and delight much like a seven year old getting his first video game set. It was satisfying yet luring for more with every passing moment. I was thinking how nice it would be to enjoy this more often and closed my eyes and thanked God for the opportunity! And I slipped into my dreamland with my life.

'Hey, I told you it was all fine.’
He then knew it was a clear sign
That they were in the same sweet boat,
And some wave will keep ‘em afloat !

Their walk so melodious and richly flowing;
Smiles and joy came along glowing.
They picked every leaf and lonely flower
That lay on the way, hour after hour !

He heard her heart and mind so clear
Not once did they need words to near
Grand attire on cute young feet
A treat to watch a print so neat !

Time may pass and they may grow
Change has lots of secrets to throw
Their shoes may not fit them that time
And their talk may not sound sublime !

But deep in their hearts firmly set
Was a feeling of comfort they always met;
Every friend knows that this is love
One that does not need any dove !

And there was a loud noise that closed the fantasy doors of that world and opened my eyes to annoyingly greet the bright sun whose punctuality. I’ve always envied. Around me were four thick walls and that same room of mine that had witnessed nearly every ‘face’ of mine! Oh! Only a dream hmmm! Well, yes. Where’s all that greenery and poetic dreams today in reality! It’s machines all the way. Even that ‘loud noise’ was from my mobile’s alarm. Imagine if we all were to live without our mobile phones and computers. Most of us can’t even think of it! Let’s give space to nature and poems in our dreams at least!


PS: The poem is shared with Thursday Poets Rally ~ Week 46 & One Shot Wednesday ~ Week 50

92 ~ SmileS ~:

Really nice :)
specially the last line, rather the ending...

Let’s give space to nature and poems in our dreams at least!This touched my heart.
By the way, love this piece. Beautiful Indeed!

Let’s give space to nature and poems in our dreams at least! This touched my heart.
By the way, loved this piece. Beautiful Indeed!

oh and it was such a nice dream and you pulled me out of it far too soon...smiles.

That was neat poetry. Simple yet powerful sentences.

so unique!!!

http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/06/thoughtful-hillbillies.html

a perfect piece ... brilliant write.

Glad to visit here. I really enjoyed your write. True, technology too often rules our lives. It's great to rediscover the gifts of nature... if only in our dreams.

Lovely! Very honest feel this penning gives.. I truly felt drenched!

I am ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/06/03/i-me-the-butterfly/

Nature....sublime yet tempestuos! We give it amiss in our latest technocrazy world. Rediscovering nature can give us our life back:) Great post Sis:))

Very interesting read, the connections you made surprised me, always interesting to encounter that :-)

A dream over all to soon.

Very nicely penned.

Thank you for sharing.

Dreams can be almost as vivid as mother nature herself.

This was a very enjoyable, hopeful poem.

Heyy nice 1 ...
Watching your stuffs after a long time ..
even the Look of your Blog has totally changed .. looking more spectacular i must say, no doubt .. ;)
Anyways, Here's mine stuff !!!
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/06/13/i-remember/
Happy Rally !!! XD

Love the dream very well written

Awww and the dream usually comes to an abrupt end, unable to remember it's worth as time passes, superbly written, nice job.

unique views on nature and how we relate as humans.

Glad to see you share with poets rally.

Cheers.

Cute Dream :)
Agree with you ,using technologies we forget the natural beauty that surrounds us all around.Nice image and poem too :)..
Take care!

What a beautiful poem this was, SiS!!
LOVED the last 2 lines THE MOST!! So very true, and sweetly written!!

The ending was nice..it is indeed a dream to get to experience nature in real life...what with modernization & concrete jungle growing..nice post! :)

wonderful! I support what you are rallying for :)

"four thick walls and that same room of mine that had witnessed nearly every ‘face’ of mine!" I was really taken with this line, its quite a good thing walls don't talk :-P I feel like you restored in nature I can hardly stop smiling when I go out for a walk in the forest and you captured that feeling perfectly

True friendship...and a great poem. Love it!

i like the story nd the flow of the poem....really unique

A beautifully penned poem. The last line finishes it off perfectly.

Lots of truth in this piece. :)

A truly great sentiment to have; I've always treasured my time out in the wilds as it it allows me to center myself on what is truly important

yes, there should always be room for nature and poetry in one's heart.

Oh! I was totally snapped awake at the end--I had no idea I was only dreaming! Wonderful, SIS!

I do agree with you--I find it very helpful to unhook myself from computers, blogs, phones now and then and just--be.

Gayle xoxo

SiS -- love the new look ... plus beautifully penned! Awesome job!

@ Animesh Ganguly

Really nice :) specially the last line, rather the ending...

Glad to see you here and to read your sweet words.. Thank you so much.. I just stopped by your blog.. Glad

to read your post for Viewspaper.. SmileS..

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@ Nishana

Let’s give space to nature and poems in our dreams at least! This touched my heart. By the way, loved

this piece. Beautiful Indeed!


Aww, thank you so much Nishana.. Happy Man.. Glad it touched your heart and you felt it beautiful..

SmileS..

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@ Brian Miller

oh and it was such a nice dream and you pulled me out of it far too soon...smiles.

Sorry Brian to pull you out very soon... Hmm, Glad to read your comment.. Thanks..

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@ Debosmita

That was neat poetry. Simple yet powerful sentences.

Thank you so much Debosmita.. Happy on reading your comment..

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@ bttrflyscar

Welcome to Few Miles ~ Glad you felt it unique.. Thank you..

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@ Celestial Dreamz

a perfect piece ... brilliant write.

Aww.. Thank you so much Celestial.. Happy Man..

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@ Myrna R

Glad to visit here. I really enjoyed your write. True, technology too often rules our lives. It's great

to rediscover the gifts of nature... if only in our dreams.


Thank you for the visit.. and you got it..

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@ Purvi

Lovely! Very honest feel this penning gives.. I truly felt drenched!

Thank you so much Purvi.. Indeed pleasure to have you here..

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@ Cloud Nine

Nature....sublime yet tempestuos! We give it amiss in our latest technocrazy world. Rediscovering

nature can give us our life back:) Great post Sis:))


But... do you think rediscoering nature is possible..??? Thank you so much for stopping by..

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@ Paul

Very interesting read, the connections you made surprised me, always interesting to encounter that :-)



Thank you Paul.. Glad you stopped by this post.. SmileS..

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@ Andy

A dream over all to soon. Very nicely penned.

Sorry to make it over very soon.. Glad to read your comment.. Thanks..

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@ sm

Thank you so much sm.. Glad to have you here..

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@ ashbeezone

Thank you so much Ashish.. And glad you stopped by here..

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@ Caoimhe

Glad you love and thank you so much for leaving your footprints here..

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@ Pat Hatt

Thank you so much Pat and glad you felt it nice.. SmileS..

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@ Jingle

unique views on nature and how we relate as humans. Glad to see you share with poets rally.

Sorry Ji, I usually write a special post for TPT but this I could just share the one.. I hope to resume blogging soon..

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@ Simran

Cute Dream :) Agree with you ,using technologies we forget the natural beauty that surrounds us all around.Nice image and poem too :)..

Thank you so much Simran.. Indeed pleasure to read your comments..

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@ Kavita

What a beautiful poem this was, SiS!! LOVED the last 2 lines THE MOST!! So very true, and sweetly written!!

Thank you so much Kavita.. Happy Man :-)

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@ Rinaya

The ending was nice..it is indeed a dream to get to experience nature in real life...what with modernization & concrete jungle growing..nice post! :)

you are absolutely right Rinaya. Thanks for stopping by.. SmileS..

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@ bendedspoon

Thank you so much bendedspoon.. and glad you support me.. Thanks..

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@ mindlovemisery

"four thick walls and that same room of mine that had witnessed nearly every ‘face’ of mine!" I was really taken with this line, its quite a good thing walls don't talk :-P I feel like you restored in nature I can hardly stop smiling when I go out for a walk in the forest and you captured that feeling perfectly

Aww, thank you so much.. Glad to read your comment..

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@ zenmirror

Thank you so much and of course it is young friendship..

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@ Chim's World of Literature

Thank you so much Chim.. Indeed pleasure to read your comment..

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@ Andy McDdonald

A beautifully penned poem. The last line finishes it off perfectly.

aww.. Thank you so much Andy... Pleasure to have you here..

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@ Ravenblack

Thank you so much.. Happy the truth gets acknowledged..

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@ GeetS

Thank you so much Geets..

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@ abthomas

A truly great sentiment to have; I've always treasured my time out in the wilds as it it allows me to center myself on what is truly important

you are right.. Thank you so much AB..

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@ inaweblogisback

Thank you so much Ina.. Pleasure is mine..

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@ mairmusic

yes, there should always be room for nature and poetry in one's heart.

Thank you so much mairmusic.. Indeed pleasure.. Thank you..

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@ teric

Thank you so much Teri.. Glad to have you here..

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@ Kim Nelson

Glad you love it Kim.. Pleasure to have you here..

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@ bodhirose

Oh! I was totally snapped awake at the end--I had no idea I was only dreaming! Wonderful, SIS!

I do agree with you--I find it very helpful to unhook myself from computers, blogs, phones now and then and just--be.


Thank you so much Gayle.. Happy to know that..

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@ bodhirose

Oh! I was totally snapped awake at the end--I had no idea I was only dreaming! Wonderful, SIS!

I do agree with you--I find it very helpful to unhook myself from computers, blogs, phones now and then and just--be.


Thank you so much Gayle.. Happy to know that..

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@ beccagivens

Thank you so much becca.. SmileS and gla you love the new look..

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A touching poem with strong rhymes and a brilliant ending.

Well said, and rhymed :) Nature don't bore no one I think..!

So very pretty. Much enjoyed.

Interesting blog...much to explore. I liked this very much. I often write about nature. I live on the edge of a beautiful floresta which is also a game preserve located in central Brazil. Thanks for visiting me, too. Hugs, pat

Charming new theme, SiS. Delighted to see you able to post this time around.

Both the narrative and the poem are lovely, SiS, quintessentially you. Poem on ...

Keep well.

Hello my friend!
So glad I read you today -- always wonderful.
This is no exception! Well Done!

i like the way you described the nature's beauty.nowadays everyone stuck with their mobile and laptop and failed to admire the things happening naturally around them ..
"there is something more, much more to life than my computer and my mobile phone." - nice line :)

@ Jack Edwards Poetry

A touching poem with strong rhymes and a brilliant ending.

Aww.. Thank you so much Jack.. Happy Man..

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@ Leo

Well said, and rhymed :) Nature don't bore no one I think..!

Never... Hmm Thank you so much Leo for leaving your fine precious footprints here..

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@ patcegan

Interesting blog...much to explore. I liked this very much. I often write about nature. I live on the edge of a beautiful floresta which is also a game preserve located in central Brazil. Thanks for visiting me, too. Hugs, pat

Pat, you must be a luky soul then.. Enjoy Nature..

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@ JamieDedes

Charming new theme, SiS. Delighted to see you able to post this time around. Both the narrative and the poem are lovely, SiS, quintessentially you. Poem on ...

Jamie thanks for the soothing words.. I am happy at even at this worst part of my life I came out with something to treasure.. Thank you so much Jamie..

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@ bsain

Hello my friend! So glad I read you today -- always wonderful. This is no exception! Well Done!

Thank you bsain.. Happy to read your encoruaging comments..

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@ priya

i like the way you described the nature's beauty.nowadays everyone stuck with their mobile and laptop and failed to admire the things happening naturally around them .. "there is something more, much more to life than my computer and my mobile phone." - nice line :)

Aww, thank you Priya.. Glad to see your comments.. Happy Man..

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@ Raivenne

Glad you enjoyed the post.. Thank you so much..

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The "cutest tune" was the sound of the mobile alarm :P...just kidding...

I just read Hema's Long course and you have ways to go to dreamland...

I have a few more stories to read in your blog page but I'm beginning to see your style and I just love to hear love stories from a man's point of view...

It's like watching a love story on screen...;)

hey
someone is special indeed. neat write ups. i liked the ones on the main page that i read today. Here i follow you. catch me back on sushmaspage.

@ melissa

The "cutest tune" was the sound of the mobile alarm :P...just kidding...

I just read Hema's Long course and you have ways to go to dreamland...

I have a few more stories to read in your blog page but I'm beginning to see your style and I just love to

hear love stories from a man's point of view...

It's like watching a love story on screen...;)


Hmm, you have too.. If you stop by my love stories you can feel the romance in me.. Thank you so much for your sweet words here.. Happy Man..

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@ sush

someone is special indeed. neat write ups. i liked the ones on the main page that i read today. Here i

follow you.


Welcome to Few MileS.. And Glad to have you here.. Happy Man and thanks for following.. Will surely stop by your blog..

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I see a clear winner here. Even if thousand people would have participated you would have win this contest. Congrats on the win. You look so smart Saravana.
love,
bala

@ bala

I see a clear winner here. Even if thousand people would have participated you would have win this contest. Congrats on the win. You look so smart Saravana.

Aww, the first person in my this post to comment on the Pic. thank you Sir.. Happy Man.. Thanks for your wishes and trust on my writings.. Happy..

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@ shweta

lovely :)
no words


Thank you thank you..

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