The bridge is not so long
I can come to you along
The cold is killing you and me
I can give you, myself, and me
The hurting reasons make me wait
I still love you with all my heart
The sweet memories never fade away
I wish eternal love and peace in our way.
cute tunes of nature
sweetness of relationship
Perfect Poet for this
Republished as a part of
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 39
:-) Thanks for the sweet hearts who nominated me for Perfect Poet Award.. I nominate Kavita and fiveloaf :-)
Earlier published as a part of One Shot Wednesday & Flash 55
I have been nominated as Perfect Poet for my Work, "CUTE TUNES OF NATURE". I accept it with this Haiku...
I can come to you along
The cold is killing you and me
I can give you, myself, and me
The hurting reasons make me wait
I still love you with all my heart
The sweet memories never fade away
I wish eternal love and peace in our way.
cute tunes of nature
sweetness of relationship
Perfect Poet for this
Republished as a part of
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 39
:-) Thanks for the sweet hearts who nominated me for Perfect Poet Award.. I nominate Kavita and fiveloaf :-)
Earlier published as a part of One Shot Wednesday & Flash 55
I have been nominated as Perfect Poet for my Work, "CUTE TUNES OF NATURE". I accept it with this Haiku...
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I’m Saravana Kumar Murugan and I write under a pen name Someone is Special. I love to be called so, as my pen name is a sweet dedication to a dream angel.
94 ~ SmileS ~:
Beautifully Written Dear. I loved it.
Thank you so so much Zainab for those beautiful words.. You made my day.....
--Someone Is Special--
i can feel the torn emotions between wanting and letting go...wishing them the best though hoping perhaps it was you...nice one shot!
Bridges are so much shorter when two people crossing them meet in the middle. Nice One Shot.
Love, and lost love, and love always remembered. Memory is the cridge. Nicely done.
SO apecial, so sweet so lovingly said
;)
The bridge between the love once shared and the love always remembered. Lovely!
Beautiful. The pic is amazing too.
The bridge is a good symbol for remembrances, and in this case seems to remind of pain. A nice One Shot!
@ Brian Miller
Thank you so much Brain for those wonderful wishes and words... Happy One Shot!
--Someone Is Special--
@ Eric Alder
Thank you so much for those wonderful encouraging words... Happy One Shot...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Glynn
Thank you so much Glynn......
--Someone Is Special--
@ Dulce
Thank you so much for those lovely words... Indeed Special...
--Someone Is Special--
@ TALON
Thank you so much for those lovely encouraging words TALON...
--Someone Is Special--
@ KB
Welcome back!
Thank you so much for those lovely words...
--Someone Is Special--
@ dustus
Welcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much... Happy One Shot!!!
--Someone Is Special--
a lovely poem...and yes the bridge is a great metaphor...do we cross or do we stay where we are...nicley said..cheers pete
I wish eternal peace and love in all hearts too!
Nicely played, Someone...
Felt it!!
Sometimes, those bridges just ceases to exist... and that's the day of bliss!
This one Kicked Ass as well!
Thanks again...G
PS. Cheer Up!
@ Pete Marshall
Welcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those sweet encouraging words! !
Happy One Shot!
--Someone Is Special--
@ kavisionz
Welcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those beautiful encouraging words! !
Happy One Shot!
--Someone Is Special--
@ G-Man
Thank you so much G-Man...
--Someone Is Special--
hey i read this one already...smiles. still a nice response and 55...
@ Brain Miller
Thank you so much Brain, once again...
--Someone Is Special--
Oh I get a two for one
this one represents so many levels of love. What a fine poem
Glad you shared with One shot and g's 55
Moon smiles
@ Moon
Thank you so much.. I am very happy to hear those from you...
--Someone Is Special--
This is all so very special!! Wow...it took my breath away. Life deals with so many bridges...we choose to cross over or stay on one side...this was excellent.
Here's Mine. Yes, I finally did one...long time no see!!!
Have a super weekend.
@ HOOTIN' ANNI
Welcome Back!
Thank you so much for those lovely beautiful words..
Do keep coming..
--Someone Is Special--
This is beautiful my friend. Well done :) Have a great weekend :)
@ Thom
Welcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so so much...
--Someone Is Special--
Ok, so there is hope for then :D
wonderfully played 55.
you expressed your sentiments very nicely!
@ Mona
Welcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Jingle
Thank you so much Ji...
--Someone Is Special--
all out for love! fantastic! :)
Thanks for linking this to poets rally.
sweet sentiments.
cheers.
A simple write about love... The expression on how one believes and holds on Love dearly..
You are 3rd on my list and yeah, I am close to tears, maybe because I am struggling to keep the Love in me alive..
Anyway, here is mine.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpmar101.html
I am glad I drop by and thanks for you gentle sharing..
so much said in the space, the unsaid.
Bridges are meant to be, for lovers to cross together into the future. Bridges are always connecting, keeping love above the waters, letting love cross and return. A beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing.
so so so beautiful SiS!!! luv it
nice poem. its short and simple but it conveyed the message that you are wishing to deliver.
best line for me:
"The cold is killing you and me
I can give you, myself and me"
you left a sigh in my heart...
your words was so beautiful, i was on the edge hoping to hear more...
here is my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/03/your-smile.html
very generous in your last line..a great write my friend.. my wk 39 is here.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/17/regret/
So very special.......
May you have that eternal love on your way. Lovely poem, sweet, heartfelt! The award brilliant!
This reads like the beginning of a song... sweet! :)
Happy rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
I love the romance hidden behind the lines. But I do wonder sometimes how hard/easy it is to keep the true love burning strong against time....
I really enjoyed your poem !! Happy rally !!
Thanks for the acceptance and nominations...
well done.
feel free to write a new one and link in.
not officially doing so, but you can do it for some rare occasion.
"The hurting reasons make me wait / I still love you with all my heart"
I love the lack of rhyme here, it really emphasizes the point. Also, the use of heart, which is so close to hate which would rhyme drives it home even more. Beautifully crafted.
very romantic, SiS..
Excellent words sis
eautifully expressed
Great write - if only we could only remember with fondness some of our past!
Such well expressed emotions in this. I hope you find the eternal peace and love you are seeking.
I love how powerful your words are and how strong love can be despite adversity.
Wonderful piece. True love is a gift!
Here;s my rally entry- http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/03/05/341/
Ah the essence of love and trueness in the lines ! :) They are simple-y beautiful SiS .. The words convey so many feelings and emotions , I am sure every heart , in love will be able to understand and most of us , do go through this .. Wishing for your eternal love to stay forever ! :)
Thank you for such sweet love poem
Nice one buddy...
your poem paints a beautiful picture of love:-)
short and sweet :)
@ bendedspoon
all out for love! fantastic! :)
Thanks a lot...
Someone is Special
@ Jingle
Thanks for linking this to poets rally.
sweet sentiments.
cheers.
SmileS.. :-)
Someone is Special
@ Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike)
A simple write about love... The expression on how one believes and holds on Love dearly..
You are 3rd on my list and yeah, I am close to tears, maybe because I am struggling to keep the Love in me alive..
Anyway, here is mine.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpmar101.html
I am glad I drop by and thanks for you gentle sharing..
Krislin, Thanks a lot for your sweeet words...
Someone is Special
@ Jillian
so much said in the space, the unsaid.
of course, that's the power of words.. Thanks...
Someone is Special
@ dan roberson
Bridges are meant to be, for lovers to cross together into the future. Bridges are always connecting, keeping love above the waters, letting love cross and return. A beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much dan.. Happy to have you here... SmileS..
Someone is Special
@ Dishilicious
so so so beautiful SiS!!! luv it
Thanks again Dishi....... Happy Man.......
Someone is Special
@ cybermushroom
nice poem. its short and simple but it conveyed the message that you are wishing to deliver.
best line for me:
"The cold is killing you and me
I can give you, myself and me"
Thank you thank you thank you..... Happy...
Someone is Special
@ sam
you left a sigh in my heart...
Glad I did.. Happy!!!
Someone is Special
@ Chim's World of Literature
your words was so beautiful, i was on the edge hoping to hear more...
Happy to know it.. Smiles...
Someone is Special
@ fiveloaf
very generous in your last line..a great write my friend..
Happy fiveloaf...
Someone is Special
@ Rashmi
So very special.......
SmileS.. Rashmi...
Someone is Special
@ scentofmyheart
May you have that eternal love on your way. Lovely poem, sweet, heartfelt! The award brilliant!
Thank you thank you thank you...
Someone is Special
@ lynnaima
This reads like the beginning of a song... sweet! :)
Happy rally!/
Glad it did.. Happy Man...
Someone is Special
@ clariice
I love the romance hidden behind the lines. But I do wonder sometimes how hard/easy it is to keep the true love burning strong against time....
true.. what to do??? Happy to read your comment...
Someone is Special
@ JL Dodge
I really enjoyed your poem !! Happy rally !!
Thank you so much Dodge....
Someone is Special
@ Promising Poets Parking Lot
Thanks a lot.. Happy Man...
Someone is Special
@ mstevensson
"The hurting reasons make me wait / I still love you with all my heart"
I love the lack of rhyme here, it really emphasizes the point. Also, the use of heart, which is so close to hate which would rhyme drives it home even more. Beautifully crafted.
Aww.. thank you so much.. Happy...
Someone is Special
@ Leo
very romantic, SiS..
Thanks a lot Leo...
Someone is Special
@ Finer Friday
Excellent words sis
Glad to read your comment.. Happy man...
Someone is Special
@ Gaurang Rao
eautifully expressed
Thanks a lot Gaurang...
Someone is Special
@ abthomas
Great write - if only we could only remember with fondness some of our past!
Ab. glad to read your comments.. Happy.. Happy.. Happy...
Someone is Special
@ Dragon Katet
Such well expressed emotions in this. I hope you find the eternal peace and love you are seeking.
Thank you so much... I wish I am...
Someone is Special
@ argentpoet
I love how powerful your words are and how strong love can be despite adversity.
aww.. That's so sweet of you.. Happy...
Someone is Special
@ Marlee-I Mystic
Wonderful piece. True love is a gift
Of course it is.. Glad to have you here..
Someone is Special
@ adreamygal
Ah the essence of love and trueness in the lines ! :) They are simple-y beautiful SiS .. The words convey so many feelings and emotions , I am sure every heart , in love will be able to understand and most of us , do go through this .. Wishing for your eternal love to stay forever ! :)
dreamy, thank you so much for your sweet words.. I am really happy...
Someone is Special
@ nohaemile
Thank you for such sweet love poem
Glad to read your comments.. Happy Man...
Someone is Special
@ Raghu
Nice one buddy...
Thank you so much Buddy...
Someone is Special
@ sajeevkmenon
your poem paints a beautiful picture of love:-)
Aww.. Thank you so so so much.. Happy to read your comment..
Someone is Special
@ shweta
short and sweet :)
Sweet admirer... Thank you so much..
Someone is Special
short, simple yet amazing...the bridge was a nice way to convey the connection....liked it a lot....
@ ashzzes
short, simple yet amazing...the bridge was a nice way to convey the connection....liked it a lot....
Thank you so much Aish...
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